David T. Kerry Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 FRUSTRATIONI exist in a spiritual woodland A forest so dark and dense There are no paths, there are no signs A world devoid of sense. Life's cosy veneer of immortality Has been stripped off every tree And life's raw vulnerability Is exposed for all to see. I try to make some progress But which way do I go? I battle hard through every day But still there's nought to show. Each path I cut, leads to a tree Each tree leads to one more Where is that forest clearing Where is that elusive door? I look above for signs of hope But trees block out the light My days are filled with darkness My nights are fuelled with fright. A ray of light sometimes breaks through A weak and pallid ray No sooner have I felt its warmth Than night eclipses day. Where does the forest edge reside? Where do the trees thin out? At least I'd have a fighting chance And someone may hear my shout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trudy1964 Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 David,I don't think you can truly understand your poems unless you are where we are. Thank you for putting our feelings to words. I am soooo very sorry for your pain. Missing my Mom,Trudy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
missing rick Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 Dear DavidPlease keep writing, you express so well what we all are feeling or have felt. Thank you! I am so very sorry for your great loss..love Jane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STARKISS Posted March 26, 2007 Report Share Posted March 26, 2007 Dear David T. Kerry,Thank you so very much for sharing your peom with all of us, It is certainly nice when people share things and your peom does tell it all... Thanks again Shelley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chandrasmom Posted July 26, 2007 Report Share Posted July 26, 2007 David, Your poem is a beautiful way of expressing this horrible time of grieving.Deborah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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