Chai Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 This is a poem I wrote, trying to focus on a particular moment or time with my dad. So far what I had written in poems was more..abstract, feelings. I decided I wanted to try a different approach. ---------------------"The Last Time"by ChaiThe last time she saw himThe door was open wideThe last she saw himHis smile opened her up inside.She sat down by the bedWanted to say, dad I love you soBut she put on a brave faceAnd tried to prepare to let him go.His blue eyes were glowingHis laughter filled the airShe wanted to cry, don't leave meLet her tears fall in his hairInstead she was joyful by his sideThey talked into the nightShe wanted him to be strongAnd fill his heart with lightThe last time she saw himShe didn't say goodbyeBut she can tell his spirit now'I'll meet you in the sky.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InNeedOfAnAngel Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 that's gorgeous Chai. that even speaks to me with my mom too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chai Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Thank you. I'm glad that my poem can speak to others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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